Sunday, 17 February 2013

Farewell, my love

prompt from 
Magpie Tales

You said it couldn’t work.
The distance
The long weeks apart
The hurried telephone calls
The unreliable texts
The cancelled calls
The stolen kisses
The meaningful glances
The clandestine rendezvous
The deception
The secret
The discovery
The end.
Farewell my love,
I didn’t want to listen.


  1. Oh, I'm sorry it didn't work out for them, but look at all they had against their relationship.

  2. This is a sad story. I like how you took us through and I actually had time to hope that it would work. I think that your form contributes to the evolution and ending of this love affair. It felt like I was rushing towards an inevitable end. Yeah, I liked it.

  3. Loved it Maire. Just loved it!


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