You
said it couldn’t work.
The
distance
The long
weeks apart
The
hurried telephone calls
The unreliable
texts
The
cancelled calls
The
stolen kisses
The meaningful
glances
The
clandestine rendezvous
The
deception
The
secret
The
discovery
The
end.
Farewell
my love,
I didn’t
want to listen.
Oh, I'm sorry it didn't work out for them, but look at all they had against their relationship.
ReplyDeleteThis is a sad story. I like how you took us through and I actually had time to hope that it would work. I think that your form contributes to the evolution and ending of this love affair. It felt like I was rushing towards an inevitable end. Yeah, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteLoved it Maire. Just loved it!
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